And I mean for real; no bullshit here, folks. I mean to get it published. So yes, if you could take the minute or two to read this short passage of mine, and review it, I would greatly appreciate it — Advanced critic encouraged. I simply decided to write a quick little thing based on this one book I read a while, so don’t ask anything in regards to the plot line, since that is not the purpose of this inquiry. I just want you to take a long, thoughtful look at my writing style. Thank you.
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Anthony squinted hard in an attempt to peer through the half-light, picking his way carefully along the shortly-cropped grass of his rather large backyard. He quietly passed the pool and the shed, making sure to keep his footsteps light and airy as he did so. The boy then looked up, blinking tiredly as he surveyed what little was left of the day; and knowing that, in a matter of minutes, it would over. And with the day gone, what else would replace it but the eerie and mysterious time known only to the world as ‘night’?
But that prospect was unimportant, for now; he would have to wait.
The sun was finally beginning to set over the hills that neatly framed the base of the horizon; the last of its light winking out like the flame of a candle left open to the wind. Anthony watched this stoically; and it was only when the gold-streaked sky was finally left with nothing but the clean, dark blue palette of twilight that he suddenly broke into a stiff run, all sense of stealth forgotten as he sprinted across the wide expanse of grass laid out before him.
Then, with a quiet shudder and a pained twist of his thin frame, he was free; no longer loping on two feet, but four. His gait was cleaner now, smoother; seemingly carrying him across the ground on winged paws. Eyes sharp and ears pricked, Anthony pelted forward, tail streaming out behind him like a banner.
In a matter of heartbeats–moments that seemed to stand out, as if belonging to a world all their own–the boy that was now a wolf disappeared into the eerie and mysterious time known only to the world as ‘night.’
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WHO AGREES WITH ME????? JAMES YAP ON NBA??JUST WTF WAS THAT.?
ok, here’s the thing, i don’t mean to offend anyone esp that particular person who just posted something like, is there a possibility that a filipino player could make it on NBA? i was ok with the question until he mentioned that he thinks JAMES YAP COULD BE A POSSIBLE PROSPECT. I mean, wake up, there’s no chance of him getting into the nba, and the worst part is, stupid commentators and i mean REAL STUPID commentators of PBA are even calling him KING JAMES, i mean c’mon, if LeBron James would see and hear that he was just being compared with some goofball with probably no good D, (and yes it goes to all the PBA teams) no good gold digger whatever you call him bullshit, i think he wouldn’t even consider it as a humor or aspiration to his greatness – king james himself. Philippines couldn’t even beat China in Fiba, how is it possible that any of them could make it on NBA? I’m a filipino and i admit that i’m a b-ball fan but not the PBA certainly. This is not about patriotic bullshit so to those who would react that i’m not being “makabayan” GTFO. if you understand what i meant by that, it’s just that i’m being factual, realistic. And yes, how could someone refuse to play on NBA? WHO ON EARTH WOULD DO THAT WHEN EVERY BALLER DREAMS ON MAKING IT BIG SOMEDAY?? I’m sorry but i just don’t believe the Johnny A. story, plus this james yap thread. If ever NBA would accept yap, that’s the time i believe that Kobe and the like should really play on Euroleague and yes, you call james yap a clutch player? do you even know what you are talking about, a “clutch player”?? omg. Nate Rob would school his ass all day, even the worst benchwarmers in NBA could school anybody in PBA. take it from me. Hate me or curse me for this thread i don’t give a damn, but to those who have the same ideas like me, feel free to post your comments, anyway, i expect some of the rude feedback from dumb people, so enjoy hating me. Let’s just stick to boxing where undeniably Filipinos are DOMINATING. that’s an A grade right there.
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