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Can someone please annotate this poem?

It is “A fountain, a house of stone” by Herberto Padilla.

A fountain, a house of stone,
a bridge, a chapel with a weather vane
and a squeaking hinge in the door,
a road bordered by flowers
and, farther on, a river.

Can we describe the world this way,
eyes wide open, shoes up on the table
with a dusky halo like a lantern,
and the still face, distant and ever-demanding,
nailing us down with its eyes,
hunting down in our innards
the cowardly swagger of allegory?
It is possible. The world can be described
in any way you like. You might
come out with one last twist of the facts, as they say,
our last coin
to take us back again to that river
that attends our childhood as it does old age.
One might cross the bridge
among the bamboo which creaks once again
like a bridge across a river,
in such a way that the hinge we have hung on to
since we were children
becomes stronger as time passes.
The house, the road bordered by flowers, and the chapel
thereby belong to us,
or we belong to them. It’s all the same.

PLEASE HELP. I dont know what it means. i need some good annotations please

My Poem ?

Dearest to my heart, I have you long enough
The foundations of our love will always be tough
The times I held you, I always treasure
The scale of my love, no-one can measure.

When you smile, the stars will swallow,
The sea will clutch and the tide will follow
Magic that makes your beauty will show
All things good will come too slow

You are my one, you are my only
You are the breeze that keeps me from lonely
Your beauty makes me clutch and tense
But without you nothing will ever make sense

Before I knew you, I was nothing but lost
My love and care was just but frost
But now I am soft, just like a feather
The fires in my heart will burn forever

———————–

I am a 16 year old, emphasizing someone in love. 2nd poem ever wrote, 1st was posted about 3 hours ago. Check them please.

My Poem ?

Dearest to my heart, I have you long enough
The foundations of our love will always be tough
The times I held you, I always treasure
The scale of my love, no-one can measure.

When you smile, the stars will swallow,
The sea will clutch and the tide will follow
Magic that makes your beauty will show
All things good will come too slow

You are my one, you are my only
You are the breeze that keeps me from lonely
Your beauty makes me clutch and tense
But without you nothing will ever make sense

Before I knew you, I was nothing but lost
My love and care was just but frost
But now I am soft, just like a feather
The fires in my heart will burn forever

———————–

I am a 16 year old, emphasizing someone in love. 2nd poem ever wrote, 1st was posted about 3 hours ago. Check them please.

Can you rate my poem??

Treasure Hunting

The rays of the light shines
Like the hunters treasure.
I’ll look for the postulates,
For I wanted to be rich.

Let me collect the segments,
And I’ll put them together.
Identify the union of the puzzle
And you’ll get a treasure map.

See the treasure map.
What things can you see?
Lines, points, signs, illustrations
Start now or you’ll lose it.

Point to the endpoint of the line
And you’ll find the treasure.
See the distance in the map
And you’ll know if it is adjacent or not.

Figures and shapes are on the map,
Such as triangles, circles and the like.
What could these shapes be?
Ideas and supplements will give a clue.

Plan for a number of ideas
For sure, it’ll be easier!
On the way think positive
That you can find the treasure.

What’s the theme of the poem?

Title: Citykid
Author: R. Baird Shuman

They took the boy out of the city
But no matter how they tried
They could not wrest the city magic
From the boy.

He looked at trees and rushing streams
And in them saw reminders of light posts
And teams of people flooding into subway stops
At half past five.

They told him he must walk in woods through autumn gold,
That he must learn to hunt and fish to be a man
But he had hunted, fished for coins through gratings
And walked in autumn moods at ten or twelve
When people prowl the streets to make seductions,
When eyes peer in the darkness avidly like Rousseau’s tigers
And hands stroke body parts bound tight in clothes

The boy was made to feel he was wrong
And they were right.
For, with them, there was no middle ground,
Just right and those who did not fit its mold:
The boy, enduring now in their good hands
The punishment, the soul starvation
Of a rehabilitation
Out of town.

Can you tell me what the poem is about?