Can someone edit my short summary of A King’s Fifth? Just for grammatical errors?

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  1. cutty in a werd state!

    it is very well quot! good job!

    ant is a LA profeser at a calige 5 min away!

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  2. allgiggles1984

    AS ESTÉBAN DE SANDOVAL, a young cartographer, ventured out of Spain to present day Mexico in 1541. He could not have imagined the treasure awaiting beneath a still lake along side an Indian settlement. Captain Blas de Mendoza, Estéban, musicians Roa, Lunes and Zuñiga, as well as Mendoza’s thought to be loyal soldier, Torres, and Father Francisco, the army’s priest, left their ship in the Mar Del Sur and boarded The San Pedro, their home until reaching the shores of New Spain. All with the desire for treasure, they sought out a guide to lead them from the coast to the Seven Cities in hope of finding gold. Zia, a young teenager with as much passion for maps as Estéban, would be this person.

    i dint understand most of it but i did a few like added teh a to waiting etc so its now awaiting

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