Guys are like dogs that are out on a hunt.They will keep chasing you until they recieve what they want.Once they see a cat it means that it is time to play a game.Once they catch you they will move on to another cat and do the same.The true definition of a dog is a guy that have many affairs don’t give a damn about nothing and hardly never,ever care.So simple to realize that he don’t want you for you he just want to use your temple which mean all he want is to feel pleasure by using your treasure.Guys are like dogs and the hunt may never come to an end. This written by:Kendra Delores Scott Prim
Unfortunately, that is not in poem form. There is no flow from stanza to stanza for me. I don’t know where to pause and to keep going. Sounds like a statement/opinion really.
I give it a 6
-Collie
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I loved it.
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“It’s not written in stone”, says the expression.
But I think your ‘poem’ would be best presented carved into a rock. Then you could throw it through the window of the guy you’re so mad at.
Or, if you’ve decided as you say in the words that “all guys” are like this, well, it’s time to start looking for another breed of dog. Choose a desperate stray mongrel from the street, or badly a raised pit bull — don’t be surprised if it bites or pees on your ‘treasure’.
As poetry, you’ve succeeded in saying some things that people will sympathise with, and the rhythm is pretty good. But isn’t that just what you’re accusing the boys of doing?
I used to complain about how mean people could be, for no reason it seemed. But then finally a bright psychologist told me this: ” I think if you were more realistic, you’d have to admit that there is a lot about rabbits, and the way that rabbits act, which is VERY attractive to snakes.” You’re a young woman — time to change and stop repeating this ugly pattern of life.
Now if I could only take my own advice! Best of luck, and don’t give up! There’s nothing more sure to blind you to Love (or any other miracle) than defiant cynicism. There’s a great poem that talks about this, called ‘Desiderata’. You could Google that, and it might make you feel better!
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Dogs are not like that. Dogs are won of the most loyal and caring animals, how dare you compare them to bad people.
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